Very few people feel they care
and even lesser really do
Very few people smile as you walk along
and even lesser wish you
Very few people hate you
and even lesser express it
Very few people are tied with you
and even lesser can hold the bond
Very few people want to know you
but even lesser really do
Very few people meet you in your life all along
and even lesser grieve on your death
Very few people remember you after your death
but even lesser miss you
Very few people come, go , laugh,care, hate, smile
all along your life
but in the end…
U r all alone!
Who knows what happens when you die, anyway? Live and enjoy life!
Thanx for the reply, but this is what i feel poetry is, expressing your feelings on matters… even i dunno wat happens after death… i myself have different ideas, its just one of those…
maan…..ur blog is really kool ….dude i hav become ur fan for sure![:)]
wow!! That’s wonderful to see a student of my age write such a good poetry….[:o]
Hmmm… interesting stuff
Once again, lemme ask u, does this reflect u??
I am immpressed by d last 4-5 lines, n kinda agree with ‘em.
Nd once again, m a lil confused ven u say “Very few”..
Neways, nice work.. will dicuss it vid ya!
It’s just 18 lines of simple English….but they carry a lot of meaning.The truth deciphered is seems apparent, but in reality perhaps remains hidden(I wonder how did u come up with these deep thoughts). Really a gr8 piece of poetry.
Lucidity of this piece of work is (like what we say at the IIIT…) AWESOME!
Keep up the good work!
Every line mean something……
u wrote a real and true poem…..kudos!!!
thought provoking!!
we can have a discussion on this topic…
wonderful poem (clapping!!)
I completely agree… at a deeper level (which is the non-superficial level) of life, each person is alone!
‘U r all alone!’ Is it so ???