This is a continuation of my previous post…
…
I hope that the storm has passed away
Coz the destruction it has left behind
is enough to last forever
I hope that the sea remains calm
with not the silence preceding a deadly storm
but with the emptiness of my soul
with the echo of sadness from its hollowness
with the silence of hope that the storm may never return…
Hmm.. lovely.
I could comprehend some of it, but gotta discuss it, especially wid regard 2 d prev one.
Don’t u think these lines contradict:
I hope that the sea remains calm
with not the silence preceding a deadly storm
or u shud change the wordings to
with the silence not preceding a deadly storm
Today the strom is no more, but all the stroms one has faced teach him/her to avoid/prevent them so there is serenity in the sea and freshness in the air, be it anywhere.